The story about a detective, whose case about murder of a little girl was stopped by Police chief because suspect was a New York’s most dangerous and powerful political figure,
he is starting his own game, but when he finds out that she is his daughter from ex-wife which had left him few years ago, he becomes an unstoppable nightmare for suspect.
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The story about a detective, whose case about murder of a little girl was stopped by Police chief because suspect was a New York’s most dangerous and powerful political figure, he is starting his own game, but when he finds out that she is his daughter from ex-wife which had left him few years ago, he becomes an unstoppable nightmare for suspect.
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Hello,
it seems to me that you are giving us?a vague idea of what the movie will be about before writing a proper logline – this a is stage in a process and it’s ok, now it’s time to take the next step and yes, the training section could help.
About your concept, I feel like you’re focusing a lot about the context, maybe you should think more about the action.
At 62 words, the logline is too long and too complicated to properly evaluate.? Please review the guidelines on constructing a proper guidelines under “Training” at the top of the web page.