“The War of the Worlds”
The strangest adaptation of H.G.Wells classic sci-fi! Planet Earth: A paradise untouched by human hands, until that last great day when a star fell from the sky. A crowd of curious animals gathering around this strange craft watch as it opens. Rising out came a creature unlike any other. Standing tall on two legs this being from another world slowly lifted its arm and the tool it held, pointing it at the group of earthlings. And that is when the slaughter started. Announcing the arrival of man.
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This is a great teaser for a great idea, but is most definitely not a logline. What actually happens when man arrives? Who are they slaughtering? Who’s the protagonist? Etc…
Some tips on how to make this more concise and to the point.
https://loglines.org/howto/
It’s a tad long.