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ice2gofirst
Posted: May 19, 20132013-05-19T12:55:15+10:00 2013-05-19T12:55:15+10:00In: Public

The streets made him, the Army changed him, and life forced him back into a world he left behind and taught him how to let go of the past.

In My Hood

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    1. Tony Edward Samurai
      2013-05-19T16:48:10+10:00Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 4:48 pm

      Cool as a tagline on a poster… Not cool as a logline. The logline should essentially tells us exactly what this film is about. WHO is this guy, and WHAT does he HAVE to do?

      Anyway — good luck.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2013-05-19T22:45:21+10:00Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 10:45 pm

      Yep. It’s a tagline, not a logline. It doesn’t tell me anything about the story.

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    3. Callum.S Penpusher
      2013-05-19T23:22:34+10:00Added an answer on May 19, 2013 at 11:22 pm

      Sounds interesting but you need to develop on
      1. Character (one word description)
      2.Goal
      3.whats restricting this goal

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    4. KnowledgeKnight
      2013-05-21T09:30:06+10:00Added an answer on May 21, 2013 at 9:30 am

      The logline needs to tell who the main character is, what his/her goal is, and what obstacles are in his/her path. Good Luck!

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