Threatened with losing custody of his son, a puritan leather worker is forced to cater for the under appreciated S&M market in his country town in order to afford child support.

I’m assuming this is a comedy. I think it has potential 🙂 The main flaw I can see is that at the beginning of the log line you say he is threatened with losing custody of his son, but then at the end of the log line you state he is taking a job in S&M to afford child support. This doesn’t make sense because child support is typically ordered on the non-custodial parent, so in saying he is trying to afford his child support implies that he has already lost custody of the child. Might want to do a little digging on child support laws before taking this on for a rewrite 🙂 The premise of a father taking such a job in order to pay child support is pretty cool though. Just need a little editing and youll be ready to go 🙂