FUCK MARRY KILL
Three best friends return for their high school reunion intent on righting all the wrongs done to them in high school ? by either fucking, marrying, or killing their tormentors.
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I’d suggest changing the title if you want this to be mainstream. Otherwise sounds interesting.
You need to pick a single protagonist; the one who has the most difficult change to make, and the one who the audience will identify with most. Jim in American Pie.
The way you’ve worded your logline gives me a vague premise, but I still don’t know whether I’m watching a sex romp or a murder spree, or both. Also, the term “fucking” is very aggressive, as of course is killing. If these are two of their primary goals in the film, I think you’re going to have a hard time making your characters empathetic, because they sound like sociopaths.
It seems to me you chose the aggressive language for shock value and yes it does all sound very intriguing. But it is very open ended. We do need a protagonist and we need to know what his character journey is. Quite ambitious to create three characters with their respective journeys but an interesting challenge all the same. I’m interested to know more about these guys’ stories and why they are so committed to taking such drastic actions ….
“fucking, marrying” — out of spite, malice, vengeance may be a male fantasy, but it’s a turnoff to at least 1/2 of the potential movie audience: women.
Are they after sheer revenge, or something more constructive, such as the reform of someone or the protection of society? More constructive will be more realisitic, more sympathetic and more engaging. Hard to tell genre here, ie. black comedy, horror, action.
First of all, I would turn off the “F” bombs. I think it’s off-putting. Second, you need to hone in. As other people have commented, it’s hard to tell the genre, and to be honest the term “killing” their tormenters in this sense brings up images of school shootings.
You need better word choices, believe me, I know.
Sounds like an interesting plot, but the use of such vulgar language turned me off.