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Posted: 2016-02-04T04:08:20+10:00 In:

In order to save her abducted daughter, a desperate American expatriate must stop an inexorable Nigerian terrorist from launching a nuclear attack on Nigerian soil.

In order to save her abducted daughter, a desperate American expatriate must stop an inexorable Nigerian terrorist from launching a nuclear attack on Nigerian soil.
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    1. Best Answer
      Singularity

      Since the motivation is to save the daughter, what she must do should directly relate. In your logline her daughter is abducted, then later it switches to, she must stop a nuclear attack; that’s alright, but you need to add a connection so we understand how stopping the nuclear attack relates to getting her daughter back.

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      “When her daughter is kidnapped by Nigerian terrorists, a desperate American expatriate has 24 hours to discover their whereabouts before they strap a nuclear bomb on her child and destroy the city of Lagos.”
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      Hope that helps, good luck with this.

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      Agree with Richiev.?? There needs to be a more direct, causal connection between the kidnapping and the bomb threat.? As he does in his suggested logline.? And?I like the plus factor he adds, the ticking clock, only?24 hours to save his daughter.

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