Penpusher
Posted: 2014-10-18T08:14:59+10:00 In:

Torn by a recent divorce, a struggling father battles to expose a secretive and malicious government agency after they merge his consciousness with that of a violent assassin to carry out unsanctioned hits.

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    1. I’m a beginner here but I think your logline could benefit finding a description for your hero that is related to the plot. For now I find it difficult to understand what informations the “recent divorce” bring to the story. Maybe if you expose stakes that can affect his ex-wife or his family this will glue it all together…

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    2. I’m a beginner here but I think your logline could benefit finding a description for your hero that is related to the plot. For now I find it difficult to understand what informations the “recent divorce” bring to the story. Maybe if you expose stakes that can affect his ex-wife or his family this will glue it all together…

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