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twilightPenpusher
Posted: April 27, 20132013-04-27T15:28:39+10:00 2013-04-27T15:28:39+10:00In: Public

‘When the perfect dream job pops up, a single gay man hire a family to convince that he is the right man for the job, but the family he rents turns out to be, the family from hell.’

Rent a family

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2013-04-29T12:30:31+10:00Added an answer on April 29, 2013 at 12:30 pm

      In view of the rapid strides in gay rights in Europe, North America, Australia and New Zealand, the need for a gay person to “rent a family” seems to be a less credible concept. Unless the setting for the country is a country and culture where traditional values and prejudices for hetero marriages and against gays still prevail.

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    2. twilight Penpusher
      2013-04-29T18:01:46+10:00Added an answer on April 29, 2013 at 6:01 pm

      dpg: Yes that?s true, and that?s why I have some problem with the logline/ story. 🙂

      I just have the idea that a person needs a family and hire one.

      That?s why I also test this logline:

      ‘When a smart lonesome charlatan uses a rented family as pawns for a grand scheme, he finds their love is profoundly changing him for the better.’

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