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two elderly ladies rooming together at a nursing home becomes best friends regardless of their odd personalities.

two elderly ladies rooming together at a nursing home becomes best friends regardless of their odd personalities.
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    5 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      >>>>Is either one of the women more of a central character?

      It’s the story of a relationship, an Odd Couple match up.? ?I don’t think it’s necessary to tag one of them as the central character. At the center of the plot is a relationship, not a particular character.

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    2. Singularity

      Is either one of the women more of a central character? Which one experiences the most amount of change throughout the course of the story?

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    3. Uberwriter

      As above, they said it well without having more info on the struggle.

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    4. Singularity

      Story is conflict, you have given us no conflict

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    5. Uberwriter

      You should show that they become friends rather than tells.

      What events does the story tell that shows is their growing friendship.

      Example

      Two woman completely different forge a friendship during their battle with their nursing home owner over respect and treatment of the old.

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