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Two friend’s relationship turns hostile after one of them reveals their love for the other.

Two friend’s relationship turns hostile after one of them reveals their love for the other.
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    1. Best Answer
      Singularity

      If this is a story about two guys who are friends and one declares his love; but the other is straight, it should be made clear in the logline because that is the hook.

      If this is a story about a boy and a girl who are friends and one declares his or her love, then the logline needs a hook, it needs that one extra thing to reel the reader in.

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      Is this a feature film or short?

      It seems to lack enough plot for a full-length feature. The action is vague, who ends up doing what for most of act two?

      Lastly, “…turns hostile…” I can understand if it gets awkward but why hostile?

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    3. Best Answer
      Singularity

      >>>their love

      “Their’ refers to “one of them” which means that grammatically it should ?say either “his love” or “her love'”. ? ?Well, which one is it?

      And what becomes the objective goal as a result of the hostility?

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