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brandongreen2015
Posted: July 13, 20122012-07-13T06:20:51+10:00 2012-07-13T06:20:51+10:00In: 01, Public

Two recently unemployed nerds get more than they ask for when they fake a UFO encounter to generate publicity for their start-up business.

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    1. JAHowes
      2012-07-14T00:56:24+10:00Added an answer on July 14, 2012 at 12:56 am

      I really like this idea. It leaves a lot to the imagination, but that’s the fun part! I agree that you need to reveal more about their profession. By doing so it may even get people laughing, even at this initial phase of the pitch.

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    2. brandongreen2015
      2012-07-13T15:11:20+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 3:11 pm

      I felt like this detail was missing as well. But I was really struggling to find a way to put that in without overloading it with information. I’ll keep thinking about it, because I definitely think you’re right here. Thanks!

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    3. colinhuangrb
      2012-07-13T14:16:43+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 2:16 pm

      I think this is a really good logline as it really pulls people in. However, maybe you would like to add more about what business they are in that would require publicity with UFOs? It might paint a clearer image about the film while not giving away too much of the plot

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    4. John
      2012-07-13T13:53:20+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 1:53 pm

      I think you have a pretty solid idea here but I would like to know more about the story, I would like to know what problem the nerds encounter when they decide to fake the U.F.O. encounter.

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    5. brandongreen2015
      2012-07-13T08:53:17+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 8:53 am

      Comedy/Sci-Fi

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