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HugomiloszPenpusher
Two strangers find themselves in an abandoned town, Penance Peak, and as the sun begins to set, they begin to realise that their dark secrets can?t stay hidden forever.
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We don’t need names in a logline, it’s taking up two words that could be put to better use.
This is incredibly vague. A?logline is a concise summary of the story in its entirety using (ideally) no more than 40 words phrased as a single sentence. Currently, all we have is two strangers with secrets in a dark town realising that their secrets can’t stay hidden. We need to know why they’re in the town, what is the inciting incident that kick starts the story, ideally one of these two would be the protagonist – who is this person, we need a goal and we need to know what antagonistic forces are working against them. This is the bare minimum required for a logline.
Check out the formula page for help with formatting, or better yet, use the logline generator to help you understand the different components of a logline and their purposes.
Hope this helps.
Who is the lead character
What do they want
What is standing in their way
When they find themselves stranded? in an abandoned town, two strangers must…?
i mean this is the basic formula but you need to explain what the major action is.? is it vampires? is it zombies? is it drug smugglers? is it a ghost town? and whatever it is what are they gonna do about it?
It sounds like they’re going to turn into werewolves.? If they are, make the town not abandoned, and instead full of werewolf hunters.? Also need a reason why they can’t just leave the town, if this town, abandoned or not, is a problem.