When her main bread winner is fired, a maverick celebrity agent must battle her industry rivals and reinvent herself to save her business from impending financial ruin.
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When her main bread winner is fired, a maverick celebrity agent must battle her industry rivals and reinvent herself to save her business from impending financial ruin.
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>>>main bread winner
Translation: ?her major client (?)
>>>celebrity agent
Translation: an actor’s agent (?)
>>is fired
Not necessarily the end of the world for her client or herself. ?It’s a crazy business with many vicissitudes. But what if he retires from the biz? ?Or dies?
But what really concerns me is whether this story is written from the pov of an outsider imagining how the business operates or from the pov of an insider who knows how the business operates.?
I recommend losing the term “bread winner”. I don’t like it much.
What is the actual thing that the agent must do to save the client that would take most of the movie to accomplish?
After losing a critical celebrity client, a talent agent must reinvent her entire firm or risk losing it to financial ruin or worse; her competition.
Well done – agree!
Hi Wickedin – Thank you for participating to?the Logline It community.
May I ask that in the future you post updates in the reviews/comments under the same logline rather than starting a new thread?
Thank you.
Karel
Reinvent herself for me is vague. It doesn’t have a start or a finish. If I look for clues in your logline I can see maverick. So does the reinvention make her conservative? Overcome a fear of heights to become a skydiver is an example.
“After years of burning bridges an agent loses her only big client, she must reinvent herself and win back people she wrong to save her business”. Off the top of my head. I was trying add a goal and specific action.
I don’t think the plot should be to re-invent herself. It should be to re-invent the client who was fired. After all, now that her client is fired it will be up to her to get him a new job.