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henbSamurai
Using a weapon bestowed upon him by a shamed doctor, a homeless man conquers his country. A dead body sees through its mind?s eye a war fought with lasers involving billions, and Canada?s ministerial election.
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Who’s the lead character?
What do they want?
What’s standing in their way?
I have no idea what this is about.? Who is the protagonist?? What is his objective goal?? What is the inciting incident?
UPDATE #1:
A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.
How does fighting with distinction in a laser war qualify the protagonist to work as a spy?
And the notion of fighting in a “Laser War” is more interesting than seducing and spying.? It seems to me the story hook is in prologue to the plot rather than the plot proper.
UPDATE #2:
A young patriot who fought and received accolades in the Laser War is recruited for efficiently leading a double life, to seduce and spy on an ex-politician and perceived threat to his country.