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CatdFifthPenpusher
Posted: June 30, 20122012-06-30T09:49:58+10:00 2012-06-30T09:49:58+10:00In: Public

Vivienne's travels through her alternate realities and discovers different lives, loves and losses. Now she risks losing everything in order to have it all.

The Everett Quartet

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    1. patrockable
      2012-07-01T17:11:13+10:00Added an answer on July 1, 2012 at 5:11 pm

      I’m getting a “Time Traveller’s wife” vibe, but I need to know more about the story. Phrases like “discovers different lives, loves and losses” and “she risks losing everything in order to have it all” are too vague.

      What is Vivienne’s occupation, strength and flaw? What is Vivienne’s main goal, and what’s stopping her from getting it? What happens if she doesn’t get it?

      Check out the “How to Write it?” section of https://loglines.org/howto/ if you haven’t already done so.

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    2. CatdFifth Penpusher
      2012-06-30T09:53:30+10:00Added an answer on June 30, 2012 at 9:53 am

      Sorry about the typo–dang iPad 🙂 first word should be ‘Vivienne’, not Vivienne’s,

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