Logliner
Posted: 2015-04-10T06:09:25+10:00 In:

?After being tricked into an symbiotic relationship with a brilliant but evil alien wanting to take over Earth, a clumsy neurosurgeon must quickly choose between operating himself or be operated by the perverted exercise of power.

The Tumor that Feeds Mankind.

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    1. Uberwriter

      I’d lose the references on the front.

      Did you miss a word? Operate on himself? Or is it a hint that the Alien is controlling him?

      Plus Clumsy I find strange. Perhaps it works really effectively in the story, but Neurosurgery is the one job that tends to weed out the clumsy.

      This also reads a bit like a setting.

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    2. Logliner

      The alien is slowly taking more control. The clumsy neurosurgeon can now take a gamble and literally choose to operate his own brain to get rid of the symbian, ‘killing’ his chances of fame and/or himself but if the operation is successful – saving his soul. Thanks for reacting and will get rid of references.

      “This also reads a bit like a setting” Now you say, any suggestions on reforming/revising?

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