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AlexpsmithPenpusher
Posted: June 24, 20132013-06-24T16:56:02+10:00 2013-06-24T16:56:02+10:00In: Public

When a abstruse astronaut is diagnosed with brain damage from a leaking thruster, his spaceship is catapulted in to the cosmos where he discovers his fuel will run out in 100 hours, now he must circum navigate fate and return home.

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    1. isabelle.allen
      2013-06-26T17:19:57+10:00Added an answer on June 26, 2013 at 5:19 pm

      Hi Alex I haven’t sent any scripts to Script Shadow. Congrats on your Dip film idea for- SIFA. What is that school like?

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    2. Alexpsmith Penpusher
      2013-06-26T15:44:58+10:00Added an answer on June 26, 2013 at 3:44 pm

      Yeah hi Isabelle the time restraints help to throw the reader / viewer into countdown mode…….Now the height of the stakes has a timelimit…………….A*** Also The character should have the basic bone structure, physical , emotional , psychological breakdown…………for Character review….Followed by a weakness, Function……………Happy Loglining……..Have you sent any scripts to Script Shadow…….I am excited about realising the production of my Diploma Film at SIFA…………Saving S.I.F.A……….A**:D

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    3. isabelle.allen
      2013-06-26T14:32:58+10:00Added an answer on June 26, 2013 at 2:32 pm

      Thanks. Good point- he should have a psychological depth- perhaps a more well known adjective though? Also I wonder if the final goal is implied ‘with 100 hours of fuel remaining’?

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    4. 2013-06-24T19:28:15+10:00Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 7:28 pm

      Thanks isabelle.I was just freeconcepting.did you read my others Thx..A**
      You should really give the astronaut some kind of emotional pyschological depth..and include the final goal but otherwise……………………..A** Not bad for off the top of the head.A***

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    5. isabelle.allen
      2013-06-24T18:11:29+10:00Added an answer on June 24, 2013 at 6:11 pm

      When an astronaut is diagnosed with brain damage, his spaceship is catapulted in to the cosmos with 100 hours of fuel remaining.

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