Annihilation
(30 words)
Karel SegersSamurai
When a military-trained biologist’s husband unexpectedly returns alive from a secret mission, she must go on a quest to a mysterious lighthouse to save his life – and the world.
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A woman must go in a quest to a mysterious lighthouse when her husband returns alive from a secret mission.
How can we tie the returning husband to the lighthouse.
How about this, hopefully, this concise version says the same thing:
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“When her?husband returns from a secret military mission, a biologist must travel to a mysterious lighthouse to save him — and the world.”
I am changing a few things with take?number 2
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“When she discovers her special forces husband has been taken captive, a resolute biologist must travel to a mysterious lighthouse to save him — and the world”
What is it about his return that motivates her to go to the lighthouse? I think that’s the key to the story as it illustrates her emotional and personal stake.
I’m now thinking that we should include the fact that her husband was the sole survivor of previous missions to the lighthouse.
But it’s hard, because in this film initially a lot of elements seem unrelated. And I’m ignoring the 3 time frames of the movie…
If he wasn?t meant to come back alive and they are trying to get rid of him to keep a secret or so, is there a way of weaving it in?
When her husband returns, the sole survivor of a secret mission, with an incurable illness, a resolute biologist must follow in his footsteps to find the cause and the cure to save him ? and the world.
Bit wordy though.
I just don’t see the logical, causal connection between his return and her need to go to the lighthouse, how the former triggers the need to do the latter.
However, what if she’s told he’s MIA — missing in action — on a secret mission, then her objective goal is to find him, or find out what happened to him.? She has more personal and urgent stakes in going on a quest… that leads to the lighthouse.
fwiw
The military-trained biologist sounds like that weird Natalie Portman movie.
Like others I wonder what is in the lighthouse? Aliens? Some other creatures? A disease?
I was thinking similar to above comment –
A biologist?s husband, the sole survivor of a military mission, returns afflicted with X. She retraces his steps to a mysterious lighthouse to save his life ? and the world.