When a conscientious reincarnation policeman uncovers misuse of a soul transferal machine and becomes Public Enemy No. 1, he is forced to come up against the most powerful man on the planet in order to create a new and more just world.

This logline touches on interesting facts known about in the world of the story: “…conscientious reincarnation policeman…”, “…a soul transferal machine…”, but not in our real world. As a result reading this logine demands to greater leap of logic on behalf of the reader to make sense of the situation the logline describes.

I suggest taking out references to specific since fiction elements and describe the MC as a policeman with a flaw his action and the antagonist.

When an idealistic police man in a futuristic society is framed for a case he is working on he must prove that the leader of the free world is guilty in order to stop corruption and save his own life.

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