Penpusher
Posted: 2021-08-18T22:45:26+10:00 In:

When a cunning Knight outsmarts a young rebellious Gnome, he must quickly overcome self-pity from such betrayal and get his lump of gold back before the Knight ignites a gold rush, which would destroy Gnomes’ precious homeland inside an Iron Mountain.

An animated feature film for tweens based on an inspiration of a Slavic folklore character PERMONIK and a region where the gold rush took place centuries ago.

I’m currently part of a story lab at ANOMALIA with Mike Cachuela ( https://www.imdb.com/name/nm0128027/), we are testing our loglines and I found this website

 

 

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    3 Reviews

    1. Singularity

      “When his gold is stolen by a cunning knight, a rebellious gnome must get the stolen ore back before the knight returns to his homeland and starts a gold rush into his people’s land.”

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    2. Penpusher

      Thank you Richiev

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    3. Samurai

      Consider the following to strengthen your logline:
      1. Altered your protag “gnome” psychology to lead into a reclaim journey.
      2. A “lump of gold” is generally lackluster, the form can be made into something more exceptional. With “Gary Glittergold” as their primary gnome deity, I had a little fun with it.

      Example:
      “A reckless gnome sets out to reclaim his Glittergold idol from a swindling knight before it ignites a homeland destroying gold rush“

      Would love to watch, take care.

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