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MichanPenpusher
Posted: September 11, 20182018-09-11T03:11:08+10:00 2018-09-11T03:11:08+10:00In: Examples

When a cyborg assassin is sent back through time to stop the future leader of the resistance from ever being born, the mother must stop the terminator in order to save the human race.

When a cyborg assassin is sent back through time to stop the future leader of the resistance from ever being born, the mother must stop the terminator in order to save the human race.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2018-09-16T19:10:05+10:00Added an answer on September 16, 2018 at 7:10 pm

      “When an unstoppable cyborg is sent from the future to kill her son, a former party girl must team with a resistance leader in order to stop the unstoppable killing machine from destroying the future of humanity.”

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    2. Anette Logliner
      2018-09-11T04:49:15+10:00Added an answer on September 11, 2018 at 4:49 am

      I got stuck on the word “mother”. Maybe it’s just me. I was wondering how she knew about this – now. The mother of the future leader, is it? Perhaps say “her son the future leader”? ?Great idea, though!

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    3. HugoHugo Penpusher
      2018-09-11T03:22:42+10:00Added an answer on September 11, 2018 at 3:22 am

      I think you should change the sentence “the mother must stop the terminator in order to save the human race”, to? “the mother of the future resistance leader must stop the terminator in order to save the human race”. This change should make it much clearer what the movi is actually about.

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