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Screenwriters Anonymous
Posted: September 7, 20122012-09-07T02:24:23+10:00 2012-09-07T02:24:23+10:00In: Public

?When a dubious pet psychiatrist loses his wife to his richest client, can a high school crush and obsessed cat owner rescue his practice and self-worth??

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    1. Screenwriters Anonymous
      2012-09-08T01:10:33+10:00Added an answer on September 8, 2012 at 1:10 am

      Yes, agreed – ended up mistakenly omitting some words. Will be reposting with a new and improved line. Thanks for the comments guys!!

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    2. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2012-09-07T15:19:39+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 3:19 pm

      This logline suggests a very passive protagonist (after the inciting incident, it’s up to two other characters – a high school crush and obsessed cat owner – to save the protagonist.) This concerns me, mostly because I’m not a good enough writer to be able to make that work, and I haven’t often seen it done very well.

      Also – in what way is the practice at stake from the protagonists’ wife leaving? I can understand that he may go into a shame spiral after that, and so I believe that his sense of self worth hangs in the balance, but nothing seems to have happened to threaten his livelihood.

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    3. ChasFisher
      2012-09-07T10:41:57+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2012 at 10:41 am

      Sounds like a great hook here, but this logline gives no hint of the “fuel” of the film. I.e. what is the primary conflict that will drive the second act?

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