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Posted: September 19, 20132013-09-19T23:18:29+10:00 2013-09-19T23:18:29+10:00In: Public

When a family father visits a prison to volunteer as a dentist an inmate steals his identity. Now the dentist has to get out and stop the killer before he murders his family. /Matilda

The Dentist

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    1. 2013-09-19T23:31:32+10:00Added an answer on September 19, 2013 at 11:31 pm

      This would be one interesting movie .

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      2013-09-20T07:05:54+10:00Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 7:05 am

      How about shortening you logline with something like: A dentist must first escape prison if he is to save his family from a convicted killer who has stolen his identity.

      Great concept. Good luck.

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