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Posted: 2018-06-23T07:57:19+10:00 In:

When a foreigner enters school in America for the first time as an immigrant, a language barrier plays against him when he wants to use the restroom during class.

When a foreigner enters school in America for the first time as an immigrant, a language barrier plays against him when he wants to use the restroom during class.
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    1. Best Answer
      Samurai

      If this is a short then it should be fine. 🙂 A feature? No.

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      “When nature calls, an immigrant student who speaks no English?must find a way to communicate with the teacher his growing need to pee, without embarrassing himself on the first day of school”

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    3. Best Answer
      Singularity

      You have a lead character: immigrant boy
      You have a goal: Needs to pee
      You have conflict: language barrier prevents him

      However, you still have to ask yourself, will an audience want to watch a two-hour movie about a boy needing to pee.

      That being said, if this is a 2-minute short film I think it could work.

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