Logliner
Posted: 2018-04-19T10:38:39+10:00 In:

When a group of people commits suicide after watching his psychological movies, an alcoholic director who can predict his possible futures must escape from a secret government who wants to kill him, thinking that he is a threat to our society.

When a group of people commits suicide after watching his psychological movies, an alcoholic director who can predict his possible futures must escape from a secret government who wants to kill him, thinking that he is a threat to our society.
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    1. Logliner

      I second variable. Apart from the fundamental loopholes, a better-active-goal will be helpful

      Predicting future does not create conflict
      …and always hard to pull off successfully

      I’d like to add….”psychological movies” doesn’t help
      Neither does his being an “Alcoholic”…

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    2. Uberwriter

      A logline must raise this one question only…
      “will our hero be able to achieve his goal?”

      Some questions that pop —

      1. If he has precognition, why is he in this mess?

      2. How does his ability to “predict possible futures” fit in this larger scheme of escaping the secret government?

      3. Why “secret” government?

      4. Can’t they stop sales and distribution of the film? They are the government after all..

      5. Why are people still watching them? The suicides are all over the news right?
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      If you are still interested…

      After his thriller triggers a suicide cult, a filmmaker must……..wait!

      He should have a better goal than escaping
      Maybe investigate why this is happening…

      good luck ashes123

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