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RichievSingularity
Posted: May 2, 20132013-05-02T10:01:35+10:00 2013-05-02T10:01:35+10:00In: Public

When a happily married woman who hooks on the side sleeps with her husbands new boss, she must convince him to stay silent or her life will be ruined.

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    1. Tor Dollhouse
      2013-05-02T12:55:31+10:00Added an answer on May 2, 2013 at 12:55 pm

      “After sleeping with her husbands new boss, a married (receptionist)** is forced to silence her fling or face unholy matrimony.”

      1. What career position does she have in order for these events to unfold ?? Above I have mentioned a receptionist.

      Hope this helps 😀

      Tor

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2013-05-02T13:18:49+10:00Added an answer on May 2, 2013 at 1:18 pm

      The lead character married her high school sweetheart to whom she also lost her virginity.

      They have a son and she loves both of them but in order to spice up her life she secretly goes to the airport and picks up “Johns” who are on layover.

      She picks up a man who she thinks is on layover but is really arriving in town to become the new boss at her husbands firm.

      She goes to a company party not long after the tryst and discovers who he is. Now she is worried she will lose everything.

      This is an idea and not yet a script so the plot can still be tweaked at this point.

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2013-05-05T07:51:37+10:00Added an answer on May 5, 2013 at 7:51 am

      “Happily married ” and “who hooks on the side” seem incongruous.

      That she’s seeking “extra spice” outside her marriage implies discontent (whether she acknowledges it or not) — she’s not getting enough at home.

      And if she is seeking “extra spice”, a woman can get plenty of that with affairs and one night stands without having to be a prostitute, selling her services at airports (which, in any case, is a lousy location; a better location for the “spice” trade is bars at airport hotels.)

      I’d pass your explanation for her behavior by some women, see if they buy the feminine psychology your selling.

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    4. Richiev Singularity
      2013-05-05T08:04:06+10:00Added an answer on May 5, 2013 at 8:04 am

      Thanks dpg for the advice, I think I will change it to “Bored” instead of “Happily Married”

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