When a king finds a strong fierce woman to be his queen, he must fight to protect from his adversary, a royal woodsman, who wants to dethrone him and keep him from having an heir.
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When a king finds a strong fierce woman to be his queen, he must fight to protect from his adversary, a royal woodsman, who wants to dethrone him and keep him from having an heir.
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What is a royal woodsman? Seems contradictory. Woodsmen are usually….er…woody. Royalty usually doesn’t concern themselves with back-breaking work like cutting wood.? Would make sense? if the woodsman was a wood elf.
You could make the adversary a miner. Hide her in the mines. Or a pirate, hide her away on his boat or an island. Or the town baker who is secretly a mage, hide her away in a portable hole.
You should put the queen in danger
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“When the queen is kidnapped by a malicious woodsman, a former adventurer turned king must once again strap on his sword in order to save his love from the vengeance-minded woodcutter.”
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Or perhaps switch it around where the king is kidnapped and the fierce queen goes on an adventure to save him.
Since the event (finding her) isn’t the source of his goal (to fight the woodsman), you are missing out on the inciting incident.