Duck, Duck, Kapow!
When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe.
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There’s not enough cheese.
Cheese and duck? Don’t think so. Could use some spicing up though. Not really savoring this one.
Love the title but I think it it works better for me as: Duck, Duck, KungPOW.
But, considering I went ther immediately, it may not be better.
This is not a bad logline. I would probably take out the “Must learn to cook” line, but that is just me.
Cheers. Do you mean:
“When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook.”
Seems to work OK too.
Although I do like the term “ancient, mystical duck recipe.”. It’s a bit absurd and I find makes people laugh… which always helps.
When a kung-fu gang cripples a Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must learn to cook and fight to save an ancient, mystical cheese recipe.
Yeah, but like I said it might just be me:
When a kung-fu gang cripples a famous Chinese chef, a young Australian food critic must fight to save an ancient, mystical duck recipe”
The logline is great, but your live pitch yesterday was THE BOMB!!
By the time you mentioned the ‘dog food tasting’, you had me ROFL.
Luv it as is, the logline is perfect, covers it all!… I was trying so hard not to burst out laughing yesterday ;D
This is the best logline here. I love it.
I don’t know your story, but I think the logline itself could work with the chef’s apprentice rather than a critic… it just reeks of Karate Kid and Bloodsport and all that goodness:
When the kung-fu mafia cripple an ageing Chinese chef, his newest apprentice must learn to cook, and fight, to protect his master’s heirloom duck recipe.