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Posted: October 11, 20152015-10-11T07:12:58+10:00 2015-10-11T07:12:58+10:00In: Horror

When a lonely woman get bitten by a mysterious werewolf one late night she needs to find the person who did it to find out how to break the spell before she herself turns into a monster.

When a lonely woman get bitten by a mysterious werewolf one late night she needs to find the person who did it to find out how to break the spell before she herself turns into a monster.
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    1. Knightrider Mentor
      2015-10-11T13:33:22+10:00Added an answer on October 11, 2015 at 1:33 pm

      .I would take out mysterious and maybe add a new twist like: She has a silver bullet bomb implanted in her chest and if she doesn’t break the curse the first time she changes, she dies

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      2015-10-12T19:35:54+10:00Added an answer on October 12, 2015 at 7:35 pm

      I agree about cutting “mysterious”: it means nothing.
      I would cut “one late night” too because it’s not relevant to the plot.
      I would cut “the person”, in a logline the shorter the better.

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