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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: June 25, 20232023-06-25T23:49:56+10:00 2023-06-25T23:49:56+10:00In: Short Film

When a lonely young man goes on a date to find love he instead finds himself in a life or death game of mini golf where a hole in one is his only option to survive.

‘No Fair Way’ follows a young 20 year old David Edwards on his journey to find love which becomes a fight for his life. David thinks he has something special with a girl he has been talking to online and decides to ask her on a date at his local mini golf spot. He arrives in high spirits only to find he has been stood up, his sadness draws him into a new installation which he finds out to be a death trap. David must battle for his life in the most cut throat game of mini golf ever. In this sadistic trap he meets Olivia a distressed young woman just dumped by her long term boyfriend. David and Olivia build a strong bond whilst supporting each other through the course. They both tie with a hole in one on every hole and figure out a way to take down the gamemaster and free themselves during the sudden death round. They leave victorious and happily together.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2023-06-29T22:25:45+10:00Added an answer on June 29, 2023 at 10:25 pm

      Interesting.
      While I am not completely sold on this, I have never seen this particular story idea before so I believe that is a major plus.
      Definitely, something to pursue.

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