ONE ATTEMPT
AlexpsmithPenpusher
When a lost miner, finds a portal to the future, he is forced to question his fate, but when a relentess pack of pirates attack him he has one attempt to escape.
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Nice Tor. I would now know exactly what I’d be getting with this screenplay. People talk a lot bout the need to be intriguing but so often end up just being vague — your revised gives me the story but doesn’t give me the ending — which makes me want to KNOW the ending, and hence I’m intrigued… VOILA!
“When a treasure hunter discovers an underwater cave to the past, he must escape the clutches of an evil ghost ship and its crew before a volcano eruption seals his fate in the age of piracy forever.”
When a lost miner finds a portal to the future, he is attacked by pirates and left with one chance to escape.