Penpusher
Posted: 2015-09-30T11:55:55+10:00 In:

When a na?ve woman meets a stalker online she must fight him off in order to return to her peaceful life.

When a na?ve woman meets a stalker online she must fight him off in order to return to her peaceful life.
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    1. Penpusher

      I really like how straight forward this is. However, I think more could be included in ‘fight him off’. Good stuff.
      Happy writing.
      M

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    2. Penpusher

      Good logline. as we hear stories that are similar to this in the media frequently, this can start a film, web series or others…

      garyedwards

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    3. Mentor

      Hello,

      I suggest you to include more details to build a stronger interest in the story.
      -What kind of actions she performs to fight the stalker? (going to the police 🙂 ?
      -What kind of online stalking can be filmed in a visual way in the movie? Watch “unfriended”, a whole movie on a computer screen (very good), where some friends are ‘trolled’ by the ghost of a dead friend.

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