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Posted: September 5, 20182018-09-05T22:07:15+10:00 2018-09-05T22:07:15+10:00In: Student Loglines

When a nightmare depicts her committing a murder, an insecure paramedic must make questionable decisions at work to avoid her fear of the nightmare coming true.

When a nightmare depicts her committing a murder, an insecure paramedic must make questionable decisions at work to avoid her fear of the nightmare coming true.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2018-09-06T06:37:39+10:00Added an answer on September 6, 2018 at 6:37 am

      Haunted by nightmares in which she murders the man she is engaged to marry, a woman struggles against the growing urge to make the dream come true on their honeymoon.
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      Or some such.? My general points are that 1] There’s more intrinsic conflict if the victim of her nightmares is the person she? loves most in her waking life, and 2] There’s the ticking clock (in this case an impending marriage) to heighten suspense.

      Whatever.? I think its a raw gem of an idea that has the potential to be an interesting psycho-drama.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2018-09-07T21:12:51+10:00Added an answer on September 7, 2018 at 9:12 pm

      Who is she murdering?
      Why does she believe the nightmare?
      What questionable decisions?

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    3. haannaa Penpusher
      2018-09-11T02:54:55+10:00Added an answer on September 11, 2018 at 2:54 am

      I think it’s a very interesting concept, just add a few more details and make the logline a bit clearer. Will “the murder” she commit be at the hospital, and that is why she’s making questionable decisions?

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