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Posted: 2013-02-22T07:31:28+10:00 In:

When a pernickety hitman assassinates the wrong target he is wounded and has only two hours to eliminate his betrayer before the Mob kills him.

Grim Game

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    3 Reviews

    1. The clause, “he is wounded,” seems like it just fell in there?

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    2. I reread it. I get it now. You need a comma between the words “target” and “he.”

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    3. Samurai

      Something about pernickety makes me think this is a comedy (but “Grim Game” tells me it’s not). Fastidious?

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