Logliner
Posted: 2018-06-23T07:43:47+10:00 In:

When a schizophrenic woman runs away from home discreetly, her family must do everything they can to try and bring her back.

When a schizophrenic woman runs away from home discreetly, her family must do everything they can to try and bring her back.
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    1. Singularity

      If the lead character is the schizophrenic woman, you should give us the reason she runs away

      If the lead character is one of the family members, you should tell us who it is and give us a little bit of their personality.

      Here would be an example:
      “When his schizophrenic daughter runs away, a caring? but distraught father must follow the clues she left behind in her diary.”

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    2. Uberwriter

      Families always do ‘everything they can’ to try and bring you back, especially when you are schizophrenic…
      What becomes the nature of their pursuit, as a result of her runaway? It would benefit greatly from a singular protagonist.
      Good Luck socs_123!!

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    3. Singularity

      Who is the protagonist?? As written the logline puts the “family” in the driver’s seat of the plot.? If the schizophrenic is not the protagonist, who is?? Who is the alpha character in the family leading the search?

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