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storyutbildningen
Posted: September 20, 20132013-09-20T00:21:34+10:00 2013-09-20T00:21:34+10:00In: Public

When a teenager and his best friend get drawn into a video game, his friend is taken by the game?s antagonist, and now he needs to – not only save his friend – but find a way to get them both back to reality./Kalle

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    1. 2013-09-20T05:15:59+10:00Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 5:15 am

      I think you can short it down by saying “(…)his friend is taken hostage and now he need to find his friend – and a way to get them both back to reality”
      Something like that.
      / Amanda E

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    2. 2013-09-20T05:11:43+10:00Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 5:11 am

      I think you can shorten it down by saying for example “(..)his friend is taken hostage and now he needs to save his friend and find a way to get them both back to reality.”

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    3. storyutbildningen
      2013-09-20T03:39:34+10:00Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 3:39 am

      Not at all what I was thinking actually, but now when you’ve said it, I see that the logline suggests a similar movie. /Kalle

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    4. 2013-09-20T01:32:21+10:00Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 1:32 am

      Much too generic- no details describing the teen, the game, etc…

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    5. LoglinesRUS
      2013-09-20T00:48:26+10:00Added an answer on September 20, 2013 at 12:48 am

      This is titled Tron right?

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