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SonjaPenpusher
Posted: May 28, 20212021-05-28T00:24:08+10:00 2021-05-28T00:24:08+10:00In: Student Loglines

When a woman with abandonment issues gets dumped, she drags her pregnant bestie on a roadtrip, attempting to find love again. Halfway there, she learns she too is pregnant. She considers keeping the baby, so as to never be alone again. Forced to deliver her friend’s baby in the car, she realizes her need is not a baby, but the love that has always been in their friendship.

Title: Baby on the Way

Genre: Dramedy and road movie

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2021-05-30T21:55:32+10:00Added an answer on May 30, 2021 at 9:55 pm

      You probably shouldn’t tell the reader how the story ends, in the logline.

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      • Sonja Penpusher
        2021-06-01T06:03:43+10:00Replied to answer on June 1, 2021 at 6:03 am

        That’s a good point, thank you!

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    2. Odie Samurai
      2021-05-30T05:42:38+10:00Added an answer on May 30, 2021 at 5:42 am

      Super fun, I took some liberties giving you a destination, leaning towards:
      “A jilted woman is forced to find herself when dragging her pregnant bestie on a Mardi Gras roller-coaster road trip in search of love”

      Hope you find this constructive, keep going!

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      • Sonja Penpusher
        2021-06-01T06:03:13+10:00Replied to answer on June 1, 2021 at 6:03 am

        Thank you so much Odie, that’s great! I was struggling to keep it short, but you really caught the essence in just one sentence. Really appreciate it!

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      • Richiev Singularity
        2021-05-30T21:56:29+10:00Replied to answer on May 30, 2021 at 9:56 pm

        Great logline example Odie.

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