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Posted: 2019-07-27T14:02:39+10:00 In:

When a young Australian Muslim girl loses her mother, her grief turns to an obsession with building robots, where she fights for the chance to win an International Robotics Championship and realise a dream her mother never could.

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    4 Reviews

    1. Samurai

      Loving it.

      Rock on, Gstar!!

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    2. Mentor

      Interesting premise.

      How does the fact that the girl is Muslim enter the story? Do her Muslim teachers discourage her from building human like robots because they believe it violates Islamic teachings? If so, bring that out in the logline. If, on the other hand, her being Muslim brings no conflict into the story, then you can leave it out.

      Also, I do not understand what the dream is her mother could never realize. Was she also building robots?

       

       

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    3. Singularity

      “After her mother dies, a young Muslim girl channels her grief into winning an international Robotics Championship in order to realize the dream her mother was forbidden to follow”

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    4. Singularity

      An interesting character and situation.

      Would it be accurate to say that the story hook could be written as:

      An Australian Muslim teenager overcomes prejudice and her lack of a formal education to compete in an International Robotics Championship.

      ??

      ?

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