Penpusher
Posted: 2019-03-07T10:29:02+10:00 In:

When a young but tough stranger arrives in an isolated community, the naive queen must protect him from the suspicious villagers. But has she made the right decision?

When a young but tough stranger arrives in an isolated community, the naive queen must protect him from the suspicious villagers. But has she made the right decision?
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    2 Reviews

    1. Penpusher

      Yes good point

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    2. Singularity

      Your logline seems to switch perspectives. It starts with the strangers PoV, then it switches to the queen PoV.
      It is better to have the same PoV throughout the logline.

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