The Angelus
alexmorenoPenpusher
When a young farm boy is thrust into the horrors of war, he must use his survival skills in order to help proect the first journalist reporting at the Crimean War.
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How young is the “young farm boy”?
Better to lead with something like “When a XY-year old farm boy is caught up in the horrors of the Crimean war, he must…”
Not: ‘Help protect” . Just: “protect”.
“First journalist” — does the entire plot absolutely pivot on that point? If not, save it for the script.
What genre is the story? Coming of age? War-is-heck-but-makes-for-fabulous-CGI? Both?
DPG- Cheers. Soem good thoughts to ponder..