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JLCampbell
Posted: April 27, 20122012-04-27T14:05:19+10:00 2012-04-27T14:05:19+10:00In: Public

When all the world's super heroes are kidnapped, a six year old boy must convince the old, terrible super heroes to reunite and save the world.

An animated children’s feature film.

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    1. sharkeatingman
      2012-04-30T06:29:15+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2012 at 6:29 am

      Love the premise. Might find another way to express “old, terrible super heroes”. Perhaps super-villians, or the “not-so-super” characters, but don’t use super heroes twice.

      I think it’s an excellent concept. Is it too similar to “The Incredibles”, perhaps (I never saw that all the way through)?

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    2. 2012-04-30T15:17:26+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2012 at 3:17 pm

      Thank you for your comment. It’s very different from The Incredibles, I was very conscious of this while writing it, the only real similarity is the fact that there’s super heroes in it.

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    3. sharkeatingman
      2012-04-30T21:04:26+10:00Added an answer on April 30, 2012 at 9:04 pm

      I’d say it was a bit more than that, wouldn’t you? The premise that super heroes are “pressed back into action”? Not saying it is a negative, but I read super hero loglines everyday, and simply the fact that they include “super heroes” does not make me automatically think of “The Incredibles”, a movie I haven’t even seen, no more than a shark movie logline makes me immediately think of “Jaws”. I believe I’m a bit more sophisticated in my judgments than that.

      But, on that point, you can certainly disagree. Good luck!

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    4. 2012-05-01T16:43:34+10:00Added an answer on May 1, 2012 at 4:43 pm

      I meant, from my perspective, I see those similarities only – having the benefit of actually knowing the full script. I didn’t mean to imply that you only saw the super hero connection and that’s what made you think of The Incredibles. My apologies for the confusion.

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    5. [Deleted User]
      2012-05-03T09:45:26+10:00Added an answer on May 3, 2012 at 9:45 am

      I was immediately drawn to the story thinking that it will mostly be told from the viewpoint of a 6 yr old – is that correct? The premise reminded me a little of Galaxy Quest, which made me smile. Trying to convince a bunch of has-beens to save the world opens the door for some fabulous banter, maybe even a little jaded adult banter, and good cast of characters. And who hasn’t been that 6 yr old, full of stubborn hope and determination. Best of luck with it!

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