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InksEPenpusher
Posted: January 17, 20212021-01-17T13:55:36+10:00 2021-01-17T13:55:36+10:00In: Fantasy

While on assignment in Europe, a cut-throat US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to eliminate her and take the crown.

Title: Lady Eve

Fantasy Thriller

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2021-01-31T21:45:44+10:00Added an answer on January 31, 2021 at 9:45 pm

      What are the consequences if she fails?

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      • InksE Penpusher
        2021-02-03T16:47:58+10:00Replied to answer on February 3, 2021 at 4:47 pm

        I’ve modified it to include what she loses if she fails. Thanks again Rich!

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2021-01-18T12:26:25+10:00Added an answer on January 18, 2021 at 12:26 pm

      I got more from the title than the logline.

      How about something like this?
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      “When she discovers the tree of life, an American journalist must use newly acquired Holy powers to protect the tree from the demonic forces who want the forbidden fruit for themselves.”

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      • InksE Penpusher
        2021-01-22T06:11:02+10:00Replied to answer on January 22, 2021 at 6:11 am

        LOL Rich @ “got more from the title than the logline”. I must say, I didn’t think constructing a good logline was this involved! 🙂
        Let me know what you think about these versions. Which do you prefer?.
        Thank you.

        While on assignment in Europe, a US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but finds she has to quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies determined to take her crown.

        Another version is:

        While on assignment, a US journalist and tomboy discovers she is the reincarnated queen of an ancient kingdom but must quickly come to terms with her new identity before facing enemies, determined to take her crown.

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