Samurai
Posted: 2017-02-21T11:01:04+10:00 In:

When an aspiring young rap artist, her Zoologist father, and a couple of Japanese tourists are stranded on a remote mountain by a sudden wildfire, they must escape the expanding inferno whilest avoiding a giant mountain lion

When an aspiring young rap artist, her Zoologist father, and a couple of Japanese tourists are stranded on a remote mountain by a sudden wildfire, they must escape the expanding inferno whilest avoiding a giant mountain lion
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    1. Singularity

      What?makes this particular mountain lion so dangerous? A] Normally, mountain lions don’t attack people. ?B] Isn’t the lion also scared by and fleeing the fire?

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    2. Singularity

      If the rap artist is the main character then she should be portrayed as such, describe what action she MUST take to achieve the obvious goal of survival. Currently it reads like a multi-protagonist plot.

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    3. Singularity

      There is definitely a story here. However there are a ton of elements that are thrown in and it is hard to tell from the logline which elements should be kept in because they are key to the story and which should be dropped for word count.
      For instance I would drop the ‘Japanese tourist from the logline because it doesn’t seem to add anything to our understanding of the main plot, also I’m not sure what rap music has to do with a mountain fire so I would probably drop that as well.

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