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crytersPenpusher
Posted: June 15, 20152015-06-15T10:06:34+10:00 2015-06-15T10:06:34+10:00In: Public

When an escaped and injured circus wolf is found in the bush, a selfish boy denied owning a dog nurses the wolf in his wardrobe hiding it from his mother’s prying eyes, a determined dog catcher and the cruel circus owner who wants to give the wolf to an animal testing laboratory.

Wolf in the Wardrobe

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2015-06-15T10:34:34+10:00Added an answer on June 15, 2015 at 10:34 am

      You have too many antagonist in the original logline, that doesn’t mean they shouldn’t be in the script, it’s just making the logline a little long.

      Here is a logline attempt with only one antagonist:
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      “When he saves an injured wolf from a cruel circus owner, a selfish boy must hide the creature or lose the lupine to the lab to which his former owner has sold the beast.”
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      Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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    2. Clint Cure Penpusher
      2015-06-15T12:40:14+10:00Added an answer on June 15, 2015 at 12:40 pm

      What about ‘When a selfish boy finds an injured wolf, he must hide if from its cruel owner or lose it to a lab’?

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    3. cryters Penpusher
      2015-06-15T13:10:35+10:00Added an answer on June 15, 2015 at 1:10 pm

      Either works. Well done. Love it!

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