The River
HullaballooPenpusher
When an over-curious hunter tragically disappears, the local townsfolk begin unravelling the legend of a fearsome predator stalking the rugged gorges of the River.
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Is this too brief? Or should it read:
When an over-curious hunter tragically disappears, the local townsfolk begin unravelling the legend of a fearsome predator stalking the rugged gorges of the River, the consequences of which test mateship, loyalty and true love.
Who is the main character?
Overly curious is a bit simple……………It is kind of like say a detective stumbles on to a crime.
Look for a mental, social or psychological feature to heighten the characters arc.
There must be Conflict and Change.
Which River be certain of your Storyworld.
Best of Luck.
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Hello, as the hunter is not the main character there is absolutely no need to spend an adjective to describe it as over curious – this is not important for the story.
Besides, you need a compelling main character to be described with a very good chosen adjective.
Think about 1) main character, 2) his goal, 3) the opponent or oppenents forces, -you have an inciting event but it is not related to the personal story of your main character. The inciting event must be connected to the main plot.