When dad goes bankrupt, one percenter Adam Lewis must learn to live within his means.
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When dad goes bankrupt, one percenter Adam Lewis must learn to live within his means.
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When his father goes bankrupt…
Best if you would specify exactly how he’ll make ends meat. Does he have to be a waiter in the country club he previously was a member of? Does he have to mow the lawn for all their previously super-rich neighbors? Or will he go into crime?
It’s the details of his humiliation that will make his fish out of water predicament fun.
“Get a Job” could actually work as the title.
Richiev, as usual, has nailed the essential issue: ?a plot should be a conspiracy against the protagonist such that it forces him to do what he fears most, ?what he hates doing most.
A logline should describe exactly what he must do anyway.
?I like Richiev’s take better because how can the character live within his means if he has no means? ?No doubt, he has to tighten his belt, but doesn’t he also need to find a source of income? ?Like get a job?
“When dad goes bankrupt a spoiled trust-fund baby must do the one thing he never ever wanted to do, get a job”
How’s does this work? Does he have to get a job? Sell things? Is he given a minder? Plus don’t use a name, it’s not needed and doesn’t mean anything in the story.