When he meets a cyborg who comes from an earth invaded by alien body snatchers, a hardened sheriff must save his family and stop the body snatchers before their invasion of earth.
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When he meets a cyborg who comes from an earth invaded by alien body snatchers, a hardened sheriff must save his family and stop the body snatchers before their invasion of earth.
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It is unclear from the way your logline is written whether the cyborg is a victim (The last survivor) of the aliens who invaded his planet and he has come to earth to warn us… or if the cyborg is an alien invader and it is the cyborg from whom the sheriff must save his family and the earth.
This is a very important detail and should be clear in the logline
another version:
“When a hardened sheriff meets a cyborg claiming to have come from near future earth–invaded by alien-race, he must get over his scepticism and prove his claims to the government before their arrival..”
Because just “getting over his own scepticism” isn’t a strong goal and neither resolves the case,
since the “cyborgs” are a norm on present-day-earth but “alien invasion” isn’t, if they prove–in time–to the government their truth, the scientists could plan to contain the situation..
(the surviving cyborg did travel back in time–from “near future”….i am guessing the humans have high tech to face the aliens)
“When he discovers the cyborg he thought was invading earth is actually the last survivor of a planet destroyed by a vicious alien horde, a gruff town sheriff teams up with the interstellar robot to protect his town from the invaders.”
The sheriff will always want to protect his family, if he he knows the truth or not.
This sounds a lot like the terminator story. And you really need a new wrinkle on that to be successful.
What else you got that’s unique about your version?
Agree with Foxtrot25.? The story seems to be a cloning of bodies and parts from other films.? I don’t see a fresh, original concept here.