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KnightriderMentor
Posted: February 6, 20172017-02-06T17:40:41+10:00 2017-02-06T17:40:41+10:00In: SciFi

When all traces of his existence are erased, and his wife and child with a man claiming to be him, a reporter must find out how and why he was deleted to recover his life and family.

When all traces of his existence are erased, and his wife and child with a man claiming to be him, a reporter must find out how and why he was deleted to recover his life and family.
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    1. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2017-02-07T07:51:55+10:00Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 7:51 am

      I can nearly see the movie. Can you add tone? Perhaps hint at the reason it happened by describing the journalist.

      It would great to know if it is scifi like blade runner or more real world like HER.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2017-02-07T09:31:23+10:00Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 9:31 am

      >>When no one in the world has any knowledge of his existence

      The story of my life.?

      But enough about me. ?What’s the downside for him? ?IOW: what are the stakes? ?In the age of Internet where you can run but you can’t hide your identity, ?where privacy is more honored in the breach than the observance, wouldn’t a lot of people consider this to be a solution, not a problem?

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    3. Richiev Singularity
      2017-02-07T10:53:46+10:00Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 10:53 am

      “When all traces of his life are erased, a tenacious reporter must discover the who, what, where and why in order to get his life back.”

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    4. Richiev Singularity
      2017-02-07T10:55:05+10:00Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 10:55 am

      Possible title: Invisible

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    5. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-02-07T12:04:31+10:00Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 12:04 pm

      In a modern world where one’s identity, especially online, is currency losing it could spell disaster.? However, the basic concept would need far too much exposition far too early on for the stakes to be clear. What if his daughter, son, wife or all forget his very existence? This would make the stakes personal and motivate him to NEED to rectify the situation.

      I think getting one’s life back is no big deal, but getting one’s family back is, perhaps make that his goal.
      For example:
      After he is erased from his wife and kids’ memory, and anyone else who ever knew him, a journalist must find a way to restore their memories in order to get his family back.

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