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Posted: 2018-04-20T13:22:51+10:00 In:

When planetary gods disagree on each other’s decisions of “universal laws”, An Earth God engages in a divine war against the biased laws for his claim in the new world

Inciting Event: When an interplanetary god meeting goes haywire..
Protagonist: Earth God
Goal: Restore Universal Order and Earth Peace

since after this meeting, the law of gravity breakdowns (capillary action, tides, etc with it..)
which means plants cannot grow anymore, rendering the food cycle useless..

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    1. Best Answer
      Samurai

      I am picturing epic battles with large armies of god-underlings. But I may be wrong. Would like a brief description of what a divine war looks like, too. Currently?imagining a?war-movie with added superpowers.

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    2. Best Answer
      Uberwriter

      “a divine war” sets up the premise but still a let-go-able information. Give us the specifics on “an earth god”, “biased laws” and “his claim” so we know the stakes and relate

      The Inciting Incident in description “after an interplanetary meeting goes haywire” works better

      Also would benefit from a better goal (than to fight for his claim in the new world)(although it sounds pretty cool)

      After the interplanetary council enforces a law against having human relations, a demigod rebels for his true love…..ha ha!
      “god”speed wind (pun intended)

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