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When seven year old Olive needs to get to a far away beauty pageant her family accompanies her on an arduous road trip.

When seven year old Olive needs to get to a far away beauty pageant her family accompanies her on an arduous road trip.
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    4 Reviews

    1. Mentor

      Hello, it should be labeled as “classic” since it’s not an original logline.

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    2. Singularity

      A father with frustrated dreams takes his dysfunctional family to California in a dysfunctional vehicle to fulfill his daughter’s dream of participating in a beauty contest.
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      Little Miss Sunshine

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    3. Logliner

      An erratic family endures a disastrous road trip to enter their young daughter in a superfluous child beauty pageant.

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    4. Singularity

      I emphasized the aspect of dreams in my version because that’s the thematic thread running through?most of the characters.

      The?father?fails to?realize his business dream.

      His son fails to realize ?his dream of getting into the air force.

      The brother-in-law?has failed so abysmally in realizing his dreams that he attempts suicide — and ?he even fails at that.

      And the daughter only gets into a “superfluous” beauty pageant by accident — and ends up?getting ?ejected.? So much for her dream.

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